Chapter X of "A Darker Story"

Argh! Sorry! I really wanted to do all of the challenges of the princes, but then I started writing my other story and it's a really long series! (I'll admit it, it's a fanfic, and heck, most of you probably have no idea what the show is!)

Oh, I have a three day weekend again. There better be some roleplays, since I hardly ever get to get in them!

Anyways, here's Chapter X (10) of "A Darker Story".

Appropriate for all ages.

Chapter X

            The princes struggled out of their final challenge. Tiger had encouraged the team in the maze, stayed behind to fight the monster cave while the rest went ahead, helped them come up with a plan to put out the raging fire in the forest, and refused to abandon his group when he was tempted, but Talon had always taken the credit for Tiger’s victories, hoping to claim Rose as his own.

            The moment of truth was drawing nearer. The crowds drew closer and held their breath as King Malicis walked regally towards the bedraggled group.

            “I have been watching you using this orb generously provided by Thorn. I have watched each of you and carefully made my decision.” He dipped his head to Thorn before continuing. “My original plan was a deadly tournament, but the addition of Thorn has made me change my mind. One of you, through these challenges, have shown me that you are fit to marry my dear daughter, Rose.”

            Malicis rested his gaze on Tiger before going on. “Tiger. You have shown that you are smart, brave, strong, willing to make sacrifices, strategic, and loyal. These are qualities that I want my daughter’s husband to have.”

            Tiger looked shocked, and proceeded to numbly trot up to the king, who replaced his red crown with a black one. “The winner of the competition, Prince Tiger of the Golden Spruce Kingdom!” Those of the said kingdom went wild. Rose ran up to meet her future husband, eyes shining but doubt lodged deep in her heart.

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            Thorn made his was through the crowd of kingdoms preparing to leave, searching for Tiger. He was a lucky prince, marrying such an amazing princess. He was glad he was a castle guard.

            Thorn looked up and gasped. Tiger was giving his speech to his subjects on the top of the tallest tree, but that wasn’t the cause of Thorn’s shock. Behind the prince, a light brown pelt covered by leaves was extending a paw, giving a rough shove, and sending Tiger shooting down. Thorn looked around frantically, but everyone seemed to be frozen to the ground. Thinking fast, Thorn took a leap into the air and flew towards Tiger. He grabbed him, but the prince was too heavy.

            Panicking, Thorn quickly created a force field around Tiger. He landed and the glowing ball of green around him faded. Thorn floated down next to Tiger, looking around at the shocked faces of the crowd.

            “A warlock! A warlock!”

            “What’s he doing here?!”

            “Evil has penetrated our kingdoms!”

            “Burn him!”

End Chapter X

  -Frost

P.S. Hehe, Thorn's in trouble!

Help a friend? ^.^

Hello Friends! ^-^/)

I'm going to answer Violets question, "What are shadow clones?" with a comic strip of my own :3

BUT.... I don't know how to work the stupid comic maker /)-= Can anyone make a video showing me how to change the color of wolfs, save your own, ect? I'd be more than happy!

Here is the preview :3

 Could someone do that video for me? ^.^ Thanks!

Let life leave hoofprints on your heart,

What happened to me?

I couldn't explain what has happened to Oak in the past few days...

hints:

• becoming randomly blind
• Disappearing and coming back looking like I've been in a battle

You know... that stuff.

I decided to make it into a comic for everyone!

 The end.

  so I'm stuck in the underworld, and i've been cloned... or at least something disguised as a clone is tricking everybody!

Also, read Victory's post below!

An Idea

Hello Celestial towers citizens!I just got this awesome idea!

DRUM ROLL PLEASE...

A COMICS/MANGA PAGE!

I see that many citizens have been creating fun little comics and i thought that a page for that would be awesome! If anyone dislikes this idea please comment your feedback bellow. Also if peppy decided to make this page could i PLEASE be the admin *makes puppy eyes*

THANKS,

Victory Paw

Hey guys, you probably haven't noticed but I have been un-active on posts because... 1. A grade 7 at school said he was gonna kill me O-O Then I had to talk with the office and wutever 2. My dog was going on weird and limp, then we had to bring him to vet's yesterday, and she said the only thing we could do was put him down :'( So yeah, :( :( :( now everyone is sad :I :( ~Jake >:C

celestial towers 30 years later

heres chapter one and the begining of chapter 2 and has anyone seen willow latly? maybe something happened, cuz not even maple has been on O.o

The reason

Here is the reason i haven't been in the kingdom

The rest coming soon...

Comics

Hey guys! So Alice has been making these really cool comics of celestial towers and I wanted to share one that I made with you. Its Jake, Fuzzy, and Violet. Jake wakes them all up to go and see a sunrise.

Its sort of random but I felt like making a comic so I just made one about anything that came to my mind :)
The link to make the comics is
http://disney.go.com/create/apps/motioncomic/wolves

Hope you enjoy! :)

Let your wings carry you to new places,

Chapter IX of "A Darker Story"

This one's a shorty.

Appropriate for all ages.

Chapter IX

            Rose’s eyes shone as greeted the citizens of the other kingdoms. They seemed so kind to her, but then again she was the princess. And the higher royalty! She thought. Once the winner of the competition was determined, she wouldn’t have to worry about leaving. Since the Cold Heart Kingdom was more powerful, her future husband would be the new prince of the Cold Heart Kingdom. Someone nudged her harshly, and she turned around sharply, about to snap at whoever could be so rude-but then she saw who it was, and her gaze softened.

            “Thorn. Are you okay?” He looked bedraggled and nervous. Thorn shook his head. “Are you as nervous as I am?”

            “No way! I’m excited!” She paused to look at him. “Why are you nervous for my wedding?”

            Thorn shook his head again. “I don’t know. I’m probably fine, just tired.” He smiled at her. “Your wedding will be great. I promise.”

            But Rose didn’t seem so sure. Thorn’s nervousness had made her realize that if she looked deep inside her heart, she was reluctant to get married to any of these princes. And something else… regret. Regret that she couldn’t have someone else…

End Chapter IX 

-Frost

P.S. Have some Slendy.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gwdWNdn_MYg

Contests & Pages

Hello Friends! ^.^/)


Now, I wish to give a page to a REALLY epic citizen, and I'm wondering which pages are taken ^-^ I wish to hand her over the Jobs page, bu I don't want to take someone elses Page away from them.

Citizen Awards. How about it? ^.^ I wasn't able to get this topic cleared correctly last time I brought it up due to some DRAMA. Now, to choose the citizens for the awards, please just post or dicuss whom you think'd be best to put on the official poll.

Rules:

~No voting for yourself.

~Be reasonable and dont take sides.

~Don't push others to vote for you.

~Dont make compacts to get votes.

~ Be a good sport! ;3



Hope that helps! Please keep off pages that dont belong to you /)-=

Let your life leave hoofprints in your heart,

 

                                                   

Chapter VIII of "A Darker Story"

Appropriate for all ages!

Chapter VIII

            Tiger snapped at Harold as he let out an ear-shattering scream. “You’re so loud, I bet they could hear you in the Lighter Kingdoms!”

            Harold sniffed as he tried to step out of the thick, goopy, slimy brown mud. Tiger looked around, trying to find a way out of what could potentially be the death of all of them.

            “Look! Why do we follow Tiger? He leads us all into mud!” Tiger didn’t have to turn around to know that the rude comment came from Talon. Tiger thought fast. “Okay,” he nodded. “I know what we have to do here. We can’t use our strength, so we have to use our brains.”

            Talon rolled his eyes and groaned. The rest of the princes had uncertainty in their eyes as they slowly agreed.

            “Okay, almighty Tiger, what do you suggest?” Talon sneered. Tiger looked around and immediately perked up as he saw the small Silver struggling in the mud. “Silver!” He barked. “Stop moving.”

            Silver’s eyes widened and he shook his head violently. Tiger looked him straight in the eyes. “Trust me. I won’t let any of you get hurt.”

            Silver took a deep breath and relaxed. To everyone’s surprise, he floated to the top! Tiger smiled as he gave instruction to Silver. “Okay. Grab that stick and climb onto that rock over there, closest to us. Right, okay, everyone’s going to wade over there. You pull us out, okay?”

            Soon everyone was out, and Yellow managed to sniff out a clear path.

            Before they knew it, they found themselves at the end of the passage. Yellow trotted up to the two goblets on the wooden table and inspected them. “There a-seems to be a-something a-written on some a-papers over a-here!” He shouted, them opened his mouth to read them. Talon shoved Yellow aside, wanting to be the important one here.

            “All of you must drink out of one goblet. One contains a powerful poison that will kill you all slowly, and the other contains the small key out of here. Choose wisely.”

            Talon reached to pick one up hesitantly, then handed it to Tiger. “All of you can drink it,” he laughed, “so that if it’s the poison, I’ll win.”

            Tiger growled and snatched the paper off the table and looked over it, then turned to the goblets. He looked inside each and began to laugh. “They’re both the same!”

            “No,” Harold yelped. “This one’s liquid is blue. The other is green!”

            “So?” Tiger shrugged. “A key dipped in poison placed in water will poison it, no matter what. And the colors are from the goblets, not the poison.”

            Tiger grabbed both goblets and dumped the poison out. A small key fell out of both. Tiger picked one up and felt around for a door. The unlocking of it brought a welcome burst of warm, blinding sunlight as the princes burst out of the chamber. The king ran over to welcome them, immediately recognizing Tiger as the winner of this round. “Smart fellow!” Malicis commented, and then nodded to a few guards, who took the key from Tiger and nudged the princes into another dark room.

            But this time, it didn’t stay dark. Torches mysteriously lit themselves, and the princes were greeted with their next challenge: a giant maze.

Chapter VIII

-Frost

Extreme News!

Hey guys! Made a signature and wanted to show it! And I have big, huge, ginormous, and priceless news! I am.. (Drum roll) ....PREGNATE!  Exciting right? Anyway Josh ain't Josh no more. He is Pueblo. Josh never existed! (Waves paws weirdly) Bai!

 

Comments, Pages & Jobs

Hello Friends! >w<

I have noticed, OUR CITIZEN PAGE HAS 200 COMMENTS. As most of you guys don't know, There is a limit to comments on pages. 200 comments on the citizen page. It's reached it's max :3. So...

ADMINS. I had promoted a few of you a while back to moderate comments. As I have yet to notice any spam bots, I need you all to remove the citizen page comments THAT HAVE ALREADY BEEN POSTED. It would be a complete mess if a new comment was deleted. So... BE CAREFUL. Also, I'd be happy if some one could finish deleting all comments on the Contests page as well ^-^

Also, there are some jobs needed to be added to the job page ^-^ Jester, Farmer, Innkeeper, Stablehand (As Willows the stable master :3). And... We have too many warlocks ;3; I'm feeling my job isn't special anymore, as so many are coming 0-0. Could we close the warlock space for a while? >w< I think every job has the right to feel special. Currently, DUNGEON KEEPERS are rarer than WARLOCKS themselves. I would update myself, but it isn't my place to update someone else's page, being helpful or no. I have my page and intend to stick to it :3 And Oak, as you asked a while back, the households page is yours for the taking! And a certain someone has updated my page without asking :| This warlock doesn't like that.

For Zoeys question about the contest winner, Silver Ratio won :3



That is it, I'm working super hard on my new siggy. SUPER HARD >.< So my temporary sig is being used for now :3

Let your life leave hoof prints on your heart,

Chapter VII of "A Darker Story"

Appropriate for all ages.

FINALLY GOT AROUND TO IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Chapter VII

            Tiger held up his paw and swallowed, not sure where to go, waiting for his eyes to adjust to the darkness. He could hear the other princes panicking. Talon groaned that the darkness would ruin his fabulous coat, Harold yelped that he was afraid of the dark, Yellow was running into walls, and Silver was unsuccessfully trying to calm them down.

            “ENOUGH!” Tiger silenced the group with a roar. His eyes fully adjusted, he searched the group. “We’ll never get anywhere if you do this! We need to work together as a team.”

            Talon snorted. “Never! We’re enemies, remember?” The rest of the princes nodded their heads and murmured agreement.

            Tiger stalked towards the princes and hissed viciously. “Would you rather die?”

            The princes were silenced immediately, except for Talon, who snorted and walked up to the red snow leopard. “Okay, leader, what’s the plan?”

            Tiger detected the sneer in Talon’s voice and realized he was set on winning. Tiger took a deep breath and pointed his tail forward. “We have to walk that way. Don’t depend so heavily on your sight; use your other senses more.”

            The group proceeded forward, with Tiger in the front and a clearly upset Talon dropping to the back.

***

            The mumbling of the crowd as they walked off to the festivities the villagers had prepared drowned out Thorn’s voice as he tried to speak to Rose. He frowned as the fifth attempt to communicate was once again, unheard. He waited for the majority of the animals to leave and gestured for Rose to follow him. Once they were out of the view of the others, Thorn reached into his satchel and pulled out a small dark blue amulet on a silver chain and handed it to Rose.

            “What is it?” She breathed as she accepted it.

            Thorn smiled. “It’s a magic amulet. It takes you where you really, in your deepest depths, want to go.” Thorn turned his head away. “It’s a gift. For your wedding, you know.”

            Rose smiled and hugged Thorn. “Oh Thorn, you’re so sweet!” Rose dropped the amulet in her dress pocket and leaped up. “Want to go look at the festivities? The villagers are proud of their creation!”

            Thorn got up to follow Rose. “Sounds great!”

            As they were walking, Thorn jumped suddenly. Rose turned her head to look at him questioningly. “You alright?”

           

            Thorn swallowed. “I thought I heard a scream…”

            Rose laughed. “Silly guard! You’re so jumpy!”

Thorn nodded uncertainly and asked cautiously, “How do you think the princes are doing?”

Rose shrugged. “I have no idea. I just hope they don’t die.”

End Chapter VII

-Frost

P.S. Still need to get around to getting a blue phoenix on my signature!

 

Hi! Happy Earth day :P Poppy's Earth day party just ended! It was fun :D We got prizes for dressing up and yeah, but.. vampwolf838 said, "I hate the earth." And left, then when we all got prizes for dressing up she threatend (Sorry I can't spell it -.-) Poppy to give her a gift, "GIVE ME A GIFT LIKE EVERYONE ELSE OR I WILL REPORT YOU!" then I sent in a jam-a-gram saying, "Don't say that to my friend." she sent back, "Don't tell me what to do and I don't care." so yeah... please report vampwolf838 NOW FOR RANDOM STUFF! ;D ~No one's mostly said anything about my idea /)-= ~Welcome random people if you joined da kingdom :P ~I was gonna make a story but I forgot my idea, so please tell me what to make a story about! :) ~Hawkspirit has lived! :'O ~Durp. BAIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^-^ ~Jake (sorry my lame posts r so short, please comment and share :D)

Stuff

Sorry I haven't been on recently! Internet was not working! And does anyone know who won the emblem thing? I cant find it. -_- All for now! Bai!

Signatures

Hey guys so I have seen some of you say that you don't know how to make a signature. Well I have a walkthrough on how to make a signature on my blog. I don't post on it anymore, it was a short-lived blog but still has some cool posts. There was scam on the comments- ads and things- so I think you have to put in word verification to post a comment. So that's why the comments are like that if you are wondering.
Heres the video:
http://www.animaljampasta.blogspot.com/2013/02/how-to-make-signature.html

Anyways, I made it a while ago but its still a good walkthrough, as long as you have paint on your computer. Its sort of blurry, my apologies. But you can still read my typing and stuff. I hope that helps! And soon all the authors will have signatures!

Let your wings carry you to new places,


www.mistywing.blogspot.com

Emblem winners, adventures, FUZZY

Hey guys! As Willow posted, Silver Ratio is our winner for the Emblem! :D Horrayyyy! Okay I said an idea for the adventure, when yeah we meet up like we do at ball and do together, (Sorry my posts are always short, well I am working on a story to post) last of all, FUZZY. DUN DUN DUN XD I dont know if shes Shadowfur or not, because last night she was talking to her dog Sparky and he gave her a wish to be Fuzzy..? But I dont know if she took it cause I left her den, and yeah AND HAWKSPIRIT ALMOST DIED ;O He told me that the fireflies in his jar... if they get hurt or die he dies too, and he only has one left so we have to be careful around him.. O3O Okay thats all bai! ^-^ -Jake (fake signature :D Sorry I dont know how to make one .3.)

Anthro Contest

So the 'Human Version' Contest entries are all in. I am so happy that you guys entered.
I had a few mishaps with the pictures. I couldn't save Erica or Oak's pictures properly. I tried everything and they would just not save properly. They saved but wouldn't download into a post. Its sort of hard to explain.
Also, I think someone submitted an entry in a post but I went through every post and couldn't find it so if that was yours please tell me and send me a link to the post.
Well that's about it!

Let your wings carry you to new places,

www.mistywing.blogspot.com
My story blog! Please check it out!

Emblem Decided- Mascot Is.....

Hello Friends!

The winner of the elmblem contest is........ Silver Ratio!! Congrats! The animal that represents the kingdom is A BLUE PHEONIX! If the authors and admins (not required, Just an idea.) Could add a blue pheonix to their siggy? ^-^ Im working on mine right now XD

 Peppy, would it be alright if you could  change the background of the blog to something to match the mascot now? o3o

Thats it! ;3 And Willow is living in another diminsion doing whatever shes doing X3

Let your life leave hoofprints on your heart,

I am removing all story page comments, now! Thank you for posting yours on the Story Blog!